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Here's another little practice piece with my tablet. Something about the pose seems a little off...

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:iconglamator:
man I havnt done a critique in a while so Im gonna give it another go hahaha, alright first off the shading looks great, good clothing, (specially the bra hat) bg works but it be even more intense if ya had a building blowing up or something hahahaha or hell sense ya gotta mecha pencil.....THE TABLET IS A TRANSFORMER, hair is fine, posture is cool, the only real thing is his left arm looks a little wierd, it seems inflated or something....but thats just me maybe im wrong...ah well keep on rockin and rollin duuuude ha ha ha ha ha.
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Too.... Much ..... POWER!!!!! D8 Nicely done! ^_^

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As for the pose: Maybe try bending the forward most arm into the body a bit more and extend the fingers on it so that we don't lose sight of the very cool "Roll"? Well that's just a suggestion but this looks awsome! I like the touch of the "rock" and "roll theme you have going on here!

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OVER 9000!!!!!!

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how did you do the lineart?

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I think it might be that the elbow on the arm in the forfront is too high. It makes it look like it is bent at an awkward angle.

Very cool. I love the coloring, it looks awesome *.*

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That looks awesome. the left arm seems a little off, but otherwise good.

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Yeah, it's the left arm. Only slightly of course.

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